MatthewMMorrow Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 I'm still pretty new at this and I'm trying to put together a brochure for potential larger non-Mom&Pop locations. Any feedback would be great. I need to see what it looks like on some left over brochure paper I have. I'm fine if you want to use the brochure yourself as long as you change all the images (except the gumball background, that is clipart from Word) and company information and don't use it in my backyard. Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7CRXu4gHbZ_YzZDZnNHV1FJWmM/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sherlock Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 You're off to a great start. First recommendation is to lose the gumballs on page two or alter the text-boxes so that the wording is easier to read. That background makes it almost impossible to read the wording on that page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bhfisher Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 I downloaded the file and open it up in word. It's easier to read the parts with gumball than shown on the website. I like it a lot. I'd find a better picture of the vendstar such as http://www.franchisegenius.com/logos/2563/vendstar1.JPG or http://www.happy-vending-machine.com/images/Vendstar_logo1.jpg Bart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ska173 Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 I agree with Sherlock, it's a little busy. Are you running just Vendstars? If you have other machines you may want to add a picture of those as well as the VS to show what options you can offer. I think having a brochure makes a huge difference when trying to locate and I like that you added the FAQ section, nice touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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